Help?

[Cubbyfan99]

If this dosn't belong here ill attempt to remove this message somehow. Anyways I need help on writing my recaps, I have one wroten up and I want to know what else I can do to make it...better. Im attempting to try and get this dynasty going and keeping it that way. But first ill need to try working on things one thing at a time. Okay here's the recap.
dynastycentral.com/dynasty/display_recap.asp?dynasty_id=14606&ID=50862&year=2006Is there anyways to improve? I hope to use less HTML and try and concentrate more on writing because i've tried using alot of HTML and it caused me to write horribly and use other peoples layouts (With permission or pubicly allowed ones.)Do not rate! All's I want is to know what to improve at.

[Bearsbacker]

I would separate your stats page from your recap page. Plus, in your recap, you have a bit much going on. With the Player Profile and "It was over when" right next to each other, it looks a bit cluttered. I would keep both the PP and the "It was over when..." on the left hand side, just put one beneath the other and not directly, give it some space. Otherwise it will be fine. You won't require a ton of HTML with the recap, very minimal.

Now I didn't read the recap, but I hope that helps.......oh and 10 sacks??? That's insane!

[dkgojackets]

lol how unrealistic. Get it off rookie.

[dkgojackets]

Oh and if you want help on the writing, spelling everything correctly and using complete sentences is a good place to start.

[Cubbyfan99]

david said:

lol how unrealistic. Get it off rookie.

It isn't on rookie, I play on all-pro and I controlled Jamie Sharper most of the game. It isn't difficult if the opposing team keeps rolling to the blitzing side. I intend to control Corner and Defensive Backs from here on out. Also, ill try to send it through 'word' the next time through.
I jacked it up to All-Madden hopefully ceasing my production, but I played game 3 prior to it, then after this if I still breakout ill edit the sliders.
I seperated the two tables of Jamie Sharper and 'it was over when...', I might raise the 'it was over when' a paragraph up though.

[Bearsbacker]

Getting there.....just a couple more small things. Your table is just a tad too wide....I know this because the Dynasty Snapshot table is at the bottom of the screen which says you're past the "555" mark, I believe it is.

Next, just add a <p> after your scoring summary so there is a small break between the recap and scoring summary.

Lastly, the "it was over when..." is a bit far down. You've got the right idea, just a bit far down, maybe a paragraph or two below your player profile.