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Post by The One on Jul 9, 2005 19:21:13 GMT -5
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Post by Jami on Jul 9, 2005 20:04:05 GMT -5
The green-on-purple is hard to read. I'd make the text white or something easier to read. As for the writing, there are some grammatical errors, but nothing that couldn't be fixed by copying and pasting your articles into Microsoft Word to check for spelling and grammar.
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Post by The One on Jul 9, 2005 20:20:09 GMT -5
ok i changed the green to a lighter version and i think i got all the grammer errors.
Any more comments and suggestions?
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Post by washingtonbsktll on Jul 9, 2005 21:30:15 GMT -5
You HAVE to create Bogut no matter how crappy he looks. Dont worry about his face, you cant see it in the game. Rate him like a 74 and look at Emeka Okafors ratings since they play alike but Bogut has more shooting ability so you can raise his field goals percentage. Bogut is a must man.
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Post by Freak93 on Jul 9, 2005 21:38:42 GMT -5
That reminds me of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles.
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Post by The One on Jul 10, 2005 1:33:33 GMT -5
alright ill creat Bogut and ill a few other drafted players to
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Post by soxpwnage on Jul 10, 2005 9:12:20 GMT -5
erm....Bogut has bust written all over him. His rating should be like 53 or 55
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Post by Freak93 on Jul 10, 2005 9:43:46 GMT -5
I don't think Bogut will be a bust. He was put into a good situation in Milwaukee. They are one year removed from the playoffs and they kept Michael Redd.
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Post by soxpwnage on Jul 10, 2005 9:48:26 GMT -5
one yr? more like 3. Bogut's from Australia so he has to be a bust  |
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Post by soxpwnage on Jul 10, 2005 9:56:17 GMT -5
Aight I just read one of your stories. And you do got some potential. But your story is SOOO REPETITIVE(sp) Maybe it's just me idk, but the repetition of things really bores me. And try and come up with entertaining ideas. Like when a player is getting interviewed, dont say, "I hope we make it to the playoffs this year." or "I know that if me and Larry work together we'll make it to the playoffs" etc. Credit some zaz. Spice it up. got some major potential just jazz it up. I'm out.
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Post by The One on Jul 10, 2005 10:33:53 GMT -5
alright ill try to spice things up a bit when i do my next article
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Post by Freak93 on Jul 10, 2005 10:41:56 GMT -5
one yr? more like 3. Bogut's from Australia so he has to be a bust The Bucks were the 6th seed in 2004, so make sure you know what you are talking about. |
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Post by soxpwnage on Jul 10, 2005 14:06:54 GMT -5
i said 3 yrs to get into the playoffs
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Post by Jami on Jul 10, 2005 14:35:40 GMT -5
Eh..it's the East. The Nets got into the playoffs last year for crying out loud. The Bucks'll be hurt by their brutal division (Detroit and Indiana), but they can sneak in..
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Post by soxpwnage on Jul 10, 2005 14:46:01 GMT -5
If the Nets land Shareef they're def. in. Even if they don't, they could land a 6-8 with ease. For the Bucks to sneak in a strong Eastern Conf. team need to just loose it and just break (i.e like the Cavs last yr.) Right now this is how I see it: Detroit Miami Indiana Boston Philly Chicago New JErsey Washington Hey, same teams from last yr!  Sry Cavs fans I dont see em getting in. Even with Hughes gone from WAS, I think they'll be able to make a deal to get out of that. Possibly QRich or mayb Cat. dunno but someone can fill in. |
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Post by sep on Jul 10, 2005 14:50:06 GMT -5
Your prediction skills are wack, im sorry but i dont see anyway the cavs miss the playoffs.
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Post by Freak93 on Jul 10, 2005 14:57:23 GMT -5
Even if Cleveland does not make it, there is no way that Washington makes it. They just lost Larry Hughes. What are they going to do now?
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Post by soxpwnage on Jul 10, 2005 15:22:14 GMT -5
TRUST ME, Washington has a great chance of repeating. I know Eddie jordan he will make a great deal to acquire a SG. The Wizards will repeat playoff appearances. And sep. who do the Cavs got behind Bron and Hughes?
A guy with thinning hair whose foot always gets injured? Jeff McInnis unrealiable? Ira Newble next MVP? I mean its nothing. The Cavs need to uproot the roster and start over behind James. They started a good offseason with Hughes, now can they build on it?
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Post by The One on Jul 10, 2005 15:58:27 GMT -5
how did my topic turn from a bucks dynasty to cavs and wizards making the playoffs lol.
anyway i just played a game(will update dynasty soon) and my Bogut is alright just that they gang up on him to much and he misses very close shots. Played against New Orleans and my created Chris Paul is pretty good for a 63
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Post by soxpwnage on Jul 11, 2005 7:31:11 GMT -5
I think u inverted teh game by sending 06 rookies in 05 game  You better have updated rosters than. Or it'll look wierd. |
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You better have updated rosters than. Or it'll look wierd.