Alex Confer
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Post by Alex Confer on Oct 1, 2005 10:39:39 GMT -5
Man ... your writing makes no sense. You're using words that are out of place.
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Keeper
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Post by Keeper on Oct 1, 2005 11:03:07 GMT -5
^Seconded
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Bibby10
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Post by Bibby10 on Oct 1, 2005 18:40:57 GMT -5
Damn, Im trying okay?
Thanks for telling me something though you've told me lots... I'm working on it, so I'd rather like ways to improve my site now rather than that.
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Post by allstarmike2k5 on Oct 1, 2005 18:44:38 GMT -5
I must agree, mine aint the best for sure, but the writing is pretty bad, not what i expected from you
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Bibby10
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Post by Bibby10 on Oct 1, 2005 18:52:36 GMT -5
I'm also trying to knock down 82... It's tough. I wanna spend a lot of time on recaps but H/S is a lot. I'm in Marching Band and that takes up about every weekday afternoon and most Saturdays. So I realize I'm gonna have to whip up recaps in less than 30 minutes. I'll take more time on the rest of my recaps, but please bare with me.
I'm tired tonight from an all day Band thing, and I'm sorry for blowing up earlier. But please realize the difficulty of an NBA season...
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Post by detroitbasketball on Oct 1, 2005 19:48:13 GMT -5
Uh...NBA seasons aren't all that horrible.
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Post by Boller2Clayton on Oct 1, 2005 20:13:21 GMT -5
And he tried telling me my writing wasn't long enough nor written well enough, when I had my MLB season going. And that is twice as many games. And if I would have said I wanted to get a season done, he would like flip out, and say to concentrate on writing. Bibby, sometimes I just don't understand you.
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Alex Confer
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Post by Alex Confer on Oct 1, 2005 21:18:48 GMT -5
Dude, recaps shouldn't be a human interest story. People want to know what happened, and that's it.
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Bibby10
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Post by Bibby10 on Oct 1, 2005 21:29:24 GMT -5
Ok thank you for the much un-needed lecture and Bstn told me the same thing Alex... But actually that was good info, since I was trying to hard to make it seem different and interesting than a reg. NBA chise. With Bstn's help I made a good recap for the MIA game... A blowout  |
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Alex Confer
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Post by Alex Confer on Oct 1, 2005 21:33:18 GMT -5
Here's my suggestion:
Read an NBA.com or ESPN recap.
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Bibby10
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Post by Bibby10 on Oct 1, 2005 21:48:39 GMT -5
Thanks, d00d for the tips. And what a better way to show off the tips you gave me than to write up my 2 point win over the Sixers recap... DUN DUN DUN.
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McGahee
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Post by McGahee on Oct 2, 2005 8:57:11 GMT -5
Work on your subtraction there bibby...
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Bibby10
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Post by Bibby10 on Oct 2, 2005 9:52:54 GMT -5
Yeah oh well...
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darjarbinx
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Post by darjarbinx on Oct 2, 2005 10:24:55 GMT -5
Your site looks awesome. But the writing sort of degrades it. I know you love Sarunas, but c'mon 17.5 points a game. A little unrealistic.
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Bibby10
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Post by Bibby10 on Oct 2, 2005 11:35:27 GMT -5
I know I know... it's slowly going down. It was because of his monster first game. Bstn is really helping me a lot with my writing. So hopefully I'll get it to the great level...
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Post by allstarmike2k5 on Oct 2, 2005 12:14:42 GMT -5
I know I know... it's slowly going down. It was because of his monster first game. Bstn is really helping me a lot with my writing. So hopefully I'll get it to the great level... Make sure he helps you with your subtraction |
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Post by detroitbasketball on Oct 2, 2005 12:19:41 GMT -5
ASM needs to learn when and what to post.
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Keeper
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Post by Keeper on Oct 2, 2005 12:55:49 GMT -5
May I suggest never?
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sep
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Post by sep on Oct 2, 2005 13:42:58 GMT -5
Yes you may, whether he listens to it is another matter. |
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Post by detroitbasketball on Oct 2, 2005 13:51:34 GMT -5
I would have to say the same about you sep.
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