|
|
Post by SilverChaosVII on Nov 5, 2008 18:16:06 GMT -5
 November 12th, 2003Murderer3rd Quarter. We are down 28-21. I had shut Michaels up. I already had over 150 rushing yards. All three touchdowns were mine as well. I went in there with a different attitude. I wanted to shut him up. I wanted to embarrass him. Nobody, and I mean nobody, calls me out. “Hut hut!” I took the hand off and blasted through the middle of the line. I ran with more power, more speed, more determination. We weren't going to lose this game. Next thing I know, I was off to the races. Down the sideline. At the thirty, twenty, ten, touchdown. Michaels only steps behind me. I turned around and shot a grin at him. It was then that all hell broke loose. “Whatever, go ahead and celebrate. Fuckin murderer.” The comment caught me off guard. It felt like all the wind was sucked right out of me. “What the hell did you say.” “You heard me. Murderer.” And I snapped. I grabbed him by the facemask and ripped his helmet off. I threw him to the ground and let out a hard right hook. Cracked him right in his jaw. I didn't stop. Punch after punch, until I was ripped away from his body. Security rushed towards me and pulled me away from the fight. I was escorted off the field... the spotlight all on me. It didn't feel so good this time. Within fifteen minutes I was in the back of a cop car. On the way to the station. Assault. I was questioned and all that fun shit. My uncle came to pick me up about an hour later. It was raining out by then... I just stared out the window while he ripped me apart. “Do you know how lucky you are to not be behind bars right now... God dammit Jamar... You are given chance after chance... You're were lucky to not be in jail before tonight... We took you in... And you had the nerve...” I zoned him out. As if I didn't know what he was saying was true. I guess I should explain a bit more. You know how I said my mom died driving home from work. Well it's true. She was a nurse. Apparently she got a late call in and didn't get finished up until after midnight. It was storming out. The other driver lost control, crossed over the lane and hit her head on. Well that other driver...... it was me. |
|
|
|
Post by SilverChaosVII on Nov 5, 2008 18:16:36 GMT -5
That's a good amount of updates for now.  |
|
Loki
All-Conference
Posts: 3,501
|
Post by Loki on Nov 5, 2008 18:26:22 GMT -5
Whoa! This is awesome man! I didn't see ANY of this coming. Jamar killed his mama..tsk tsk! I cannot wait for more.
Miami man...do it!!!
|
|
|
|
Post by SilverChaosVII on Nov 5, 2008 18:43:33 GMT -5
mmmmm... just because you left a comment... I think I'll update once more tonight  |
|
|
|
Post by SilverChaosVII on Nov 5, 2008 18:56:59 GMT -5
November 13th, 2003UnwantedSo... We lost the game last night. 35-28. Wilson will be going to the championship game. We're done. Miami, Florida State, UCLA, Texas Christian University, Eastern Carolina, and Temple have all informed me that I am no longer being offered scholarships to attend their university's. I'm suspended from school for a week. I have to pay for an operation for Michaels. I messed up his cheek pretty bad. Lastly, I have to give 15 hours of community service between now and February. The only good news I have to report is that I spoke with Rachel and explained everything to her. She was fairly understanding. I'm lucky to have somebody like her in my life. She is always there for me. She wants to go to school in Virginia though. I'm afraid I won't hear too much from her once we leave for college. But hey, maybe I can go to Virginia. Everybody has withdrawn their scholarships so it's not like I'm passing anything up. Somebody has to want me... right?
|
|
Loki
All-Conference
Posts: 3,501
|
Post by Loki on Nov 5, 2008 19:11:13 GMT -5
Virginia could be interesting. Maybe VA Tech but they're past wouldn't be a good fit for the kinda trouble Jamar's already gotten into.
|
|
|
|
Post by SilverChaosVII on Nov 5, 2008 19:41:32 GMT -5
Don't worry. I'd make him drive into a building before he would become a Cavalier |
|
D-Mac
All-Conference
M-I-Z-Z-O-U
Posts: 1,717
|
Post by D-Mac on Nov 6, 2008 10:09:37 GMT -5
damn shits amazing so far bro. Great going.
|
|
bearcat
All-Conference
Posts: 3,276
|
Post by bearcat on Nov 8, 2008 11:54:58 GMT -5
How things go downhill so fast for Jamar....hopefully he can land at a BCS school still with all of those scholarships off the table.
Great story, you've got me reading.
Oh, forgot to ask...is it possible I could get a Washington banner? I need something a little different than a logo. It can be like Loki's...just simple stuff. Thanks if you can.
|
|
|
|
Post by SilverChaosVII on Nov 21, 2008 15:19:07 GMT -5
So I got rid of my 360 and I have a PS3 again...
So I am trying to decide whether to continue this or to just start it as a Madden only dynasty... make a storyline coming from straight out of college. I enjoy Madden more for Superstar... that's why I was thinking of doing it. Thoughts?
|
|
Loki
All-Conference
Posts: 3,501
|
Post by Loki on Nov 21, 2008 17:01:45 GMT -5
Whatever you do would be sweet for me man, you know I'll be reading and enjoying. I hate both, I actually just use dynasty/franchise for the Shannon Kennedy story. Gives me more control to make sure things don't get stupid in any regard.
|
|
|
|
Post by SilverChaosVII on Nov 21, 2008 17:41:45 GMT -5
Yeah, I just like the whole concept of only being one player though. I feel like if I played as the team I would just dominate... and be biased in play calling lol.
But I think I may just do a NFL one. Not too sure when I'll be getting Madden though so it may be a week or so until I start it up
|
|
