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Post by ucrossed23 on Jul 25, 2004 0:43:53 GMT -5
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Post by RK4Life on Jul 25, 2004 13:42:34 GMT -5
I don't think it's a terrible idea or anything, but sometimes a fan's view isn't as exciting as a real player's view or a broadcaster/journalist's view.
Basically, I think that sometimes a fan's point of view can be a little opinionated; I find that things go much better when you have somebody who isn't bias to one side. Ideas might become a little cloudy since the fan is giving his opinion of his own team. Do you get the basic idea of what I'm trying to say?
Plus, just for the record, I felt a little uncomfortable reading it. It didn't flow as well to me; you can definitely do better than that, for sure.
Again, these are just my opinions. Like I said, it's not a terrible idea or anything, but it's not your best idea, if you know what I mean. Nothing against you or your dynasty, of course.
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Post by Terps2k3 on Jul 25, 2004 18:45:16 GMT -5
ucrossed, all I'm gonan say is that you tried something creative and different. That scores ya an A for effort. it's not bad, though.
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Post by Ircknewskool on Jul 25, 2004 22:05:21 GMT -5
It's a little ramblish...but not bad
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