comments please

[bvrat5199]

Keeping in mind that this is the very first page I have ever done with HTML what do you think? I am attempting to do all the work myself so any constructive criticism is welcome. If you want to rip it to shreds go ahead. Just keep in mind this is the first time I ever attempted to do a dynasty in this type of format.

Thanks for the help!


www.dynastycentral.com/dynasty/dynasty.asp?ID=14488

[Freak93]

I must say it is pretty good. Basic, but good. Better than a lot of first timers. It just takes some practice, I am sure you will get even better.

[theretrunofasm]

suggestions....

get a layout, ask someone, like me and they can make you one, it is just a template that you use to write your stories and such on. If you want an example click the banner in my sig and what comes up is my layout.
Have someone make you a banner, using other banners and trying to stretch them isnt good they get all pixilie and hard to see.

other than that just keep learning and eventually you will get the hang of it

[JacktheRipper]

bvrat5199 said:

Keeping in mind that this is the very first page I have ever done with HTML what do you think? I am attempting to do all the work myself so any constructive criticism is welcome. If you want to rip it to shreds go ahead. Just keep in mind this is the first time I ever attempted to do a dynasty in this type of format.

Thanks for the help!

www.dynastycentral.com/dynasty/dynasty.asp?ID=14475

You hate teams with a passion, I like you already.

Just kind of tinker with things when it comes to HTML, trial and error is the best way to really get things IMO. Also there are a few websites out there that can teach you quite a bit when you get ready to get a little fancy.

I really just want to read a story personally, so give me something good to read and I'll be there to check in, even you have a Tennessee dynasty.

[littlet826]

theretrunofasm said:

suggestions....

get a layout, ask someone, like me and they can make you one, it is just a template that you use to write your stories and such on. If you want an example click the banner in my sig and what comes up is my layout.
Have someone make you a banner, using other banners and trying to stretch them isnt good they get all pixilie and hard to see.

other than that just keep learning and eventually you will get the hang of it

Don't incourage him to ask for people to make him something. Then he will turn into someone like, um you.

It's better that you learn how to make your own stuff. People will better appreciate your dynasty if you make all the stuff yourself. As for the layout now, it's not really anything, but at least you have some HTML basics down. Just check out some HTML help sites, and you will gradually get better.

By the way ASM I was just kidding about the first part of my post. AT least you make most of your own stuff now. Except for your extremely sexy Texas banner made by some extemely talented person. ;D

[bvrat5199]

I don't believe this! My little nephew deleted my entire Dynasty! I will be starting a new one but will not be posting anything until tomm. Thanks for the advice but I really do want to learn how to do this stuff on my own. I will probably run 2 dynasty's one to practice my HTML on and one to actually play the games and do very basic and have fun with.

Edit - I had some spare time today after all the link above is for the new page and the new dynasty, please provide feedback. Thanks