Check Out My New Bengals Dynasty!

[ajbry]

Hey, I'm new here, joined the site a few days ago, and I'm a huge Bengals fan [lost $20 on the Pats game yesterday, lol]. Here's my Bengals dynasty:


www.dynastycentral.com/dynasty/dynasty.asp?ID=9016

Would really appreciate any comments, and if you could rate my dynasty, that would be great as well. Thanks!

[Alex Confer]

Wow! Great start, welcome to DC.

[stewaat]

That is a really good start.

*up the sliders*

[Leak2Troupe03]

This looks really good for your first dynasty. Nice job!!

Kind of sucks, I thought I would be the only one with a Bengals dynasty, but hey it should be fun to see how yours goes too ;D

Anyway if you need any help, IM Me at bmoreglobtrotta2. Good luck with the dynasty.

[LjSnUo]

hey man thats really nice i hope you can become the next Leak or UC. Thats prolly one of the better HTML dynasties for the users first one, what the hell did i just say?

well nice banner, and im guessing that you play on the computer, right?

[nafsder2007]

LjSnUo said:

hey man thats really nice i hope you can become the next Leak or UC. Thats prolly one of the better HTML dynasties for the users first one, what the hell did i just say?

well nice banner, and im guessing that you play on the computer, right?

It is off to a great start, especially with the screenshots and banner. The writing is pretty good, especially for a newbie who most likely hasn't realized that what DC really wants is writing. The potential is great, but LjSnUo, I would'nt say the HTML is anything amazing. It looks good, but it is really just three images and then the story. The HTML is almost non existant. But still, great dynasty, and if your writing were to improve, it would be an amazingly really awesome-ish dynasty. By the way, if you made that banner, could you please PM me the name of the font you used?

[NoT25hAbY]

Congradulations on a wonderful site. Leak is right, kind of sux theres two of the same team, but who cares, it looks good.

Over time you'll get used to what we do on the site, and what people look for in your dynasty, for now j/ enjoy. Leak is the mod, so he's good to go to, and idk wut I am considered. I'm an NFL section faithfull or alumni haha, so IM me at NoT25hAbY or mail me at NoT25hAbY@yahoo. I'd be glad 2 help.

It's good to see fresh faces contributing to DC...

[detroitbasketball]

What does that make me, rubbish? Crap? Useless freak with an unstarted Chiefs dynasty?

Sorry, I'm having pangs of Ron Artest-style insanity.

[NoT25hAbY]

not at all.... it makes you a Newbie to the NFL. Sure, you know what your doing, but seeing it is that Leak, Jami, and I were on top of things for quite a while in the NFL, I figured our names could be mentioning without mentioning every person who has a dynasty curently under construction.

[LjSnUo]

Nafsder2003 said:

It is off to a great start, especially with the screenshots and banner. The writing is pretty good, especially for a newbie who most likely hasn't realized that what DC really wants is writing. The potential is great, but LjSnUo, I would'nt say the HTML is anything amazing. It looks good, but it is really just three images and then the story. The HTML is almost non existant. But still, great dynasty, and if your writing were to improve, it would be an amazingly really awesome-ish dynasty. By the way, if you made that banner, could you please PM me the name of the font you used?

well since you werent here when Leak and UC started you dont know that their sites didnt have a ton of HTML in the begining. Im sure this kid will step up his game when he starts to learn more things. Considering hes got a nice banner and uses his pics well, i think he could evolve.

BTW use paragraphs in your stories, the first sentence should be a paragraph then 2-3 sentences per from there on out.