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Post by detroitbasketball on Mar 23, 2005 22:06:20 GMT -5
I'd like some feedback on my Tigers dynasty outside of the "Looks great, keep going" I get in the ratings...what do you like, what don't you like, what could be improved, etc. Feel free to tell me through this thread or through a rating. I just want some constructive feedback so I can make this the best I can. Link's in the sig.
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Jami
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Post by Jami on Mar 24, 2005 12:52:03 GMT -5
Maybe it's just me, but the orange banner kind of clashes with the rest of the layout that's dark blue. I'm nitpicking, though.  |
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Post by not2shaby on Mar 24, 2005 13:06:08 GMT -5
Yeah...
I remember saying that earlier in the dynasty when you first started. Besides that, the layout and way you post your games and the roarmail, it's all good. I follow it all.
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Condemned
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Post by Condemned on Mar 24, 2005 15:11:05 GMT -5
how's this banner? i think it will go a little bit better with your color scheme sorry for the poor editing, i have trouble erasing around bats...  |
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Post by not2shaby on Mar 24, 2005 15:19:41 GMT -5
Wow Rbd....
that is incredible. You Banners continue to get better and better.
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cooljayhu
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Post by cooljayhu on Mar 24, 2005 16:17:10 GMT -5
for some reason the Minor League Report Section is half cut off. BTW use rbdb banner thats sick
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Post by claytonscrew80 on Mar 24, 2005 16:42:30 GMT -5
Rbd how did you get the logo to glow like that?
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nafsder2007
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Post by nafsder2007 on Mar 24, 2005 17:09:48 GMT -5
...OK, I'll be honest. I don't really like it. First of all, the layout is incredibly busy and messed up. Tables are cut off. Different shades of blue are used in different parts of the table. There is that paragraph long intro to Roar Mail that for some reason links to standings.
The writing itself is subpar. I've written instant messages longer than the majority of your stories. All your attempts of non game related writing (The Roar and Around the Horn) don't have a single piece of writing.
And the page is not very realistic. You made a string of quick trades weighted in your favor (...Corey Patterson=amazing...) just days before your first game. For a team that spent millions rebuilding all offseason, why would they change all their players before spring training even ends?
I do give you credit for keeping the page up to date and all the stats and standings there, but you are missing things like the Minor Leagues and writing which I would expect out of a member like you.
Oh well, just my opinion. Everyone else seems to like it. Do what you want, it isnt' my decision.
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Post by not2shaby on Mar 24, 2005 17:11:51 GMT -5
Keep in mind all of that comming from someone who used to make Layouts for a living here haha, stongly for writing rules over anything else, and is a bigtime basebal fan. lol.
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Post by Freak93 on Mar 24, 2005 17:12:37 GMT -5
Rbd how did you get the logo to glow like that? It is a .gif animation. |
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Post by detroitbasketball on Mar 24, 2005 17:18:25 GMT -5
Nafsder, the Roar is coming whenever I get more than one piece of Roarmail, and I completely forgot I had around the horn. Thanks for the reminder, not sure what I'm gonna do with that.
BTW, new banner is up. Thanks rbdb.
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JETS393
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Post by JETS393 on Mar 24, 2005 17:56:10 GMT -5
my feedback=in my rating
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Post by 6rz2k5 on Mar 24, 2005 20:25:31 GMT -5
I said it once, and I said it again. If you had writing, I could care less if the layout is kinda weird. It works for me. But it's a big step to take from going to little writing (I know Nafsder purposely exagerated to make a point, but it isn't too horendous, and you've shwon potential) to detailed writing that people look forward to reading.
Good luck, and I hope this sticks.
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